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Below is the list of the Fortune Top 10 Most Powerful Women in Business, 2020. Summarise the information along with your observations in at least 150 words.
Rank - 2020
Rank - 2019
President & CEO
Julie Sweet, CEO, Accenture, has emerged as the most powerful woman in business for the year 2020 in the Fortune Top 10 Most Powerful Women in Business list. She was ranked ninth in 2019. Mary Barra, CEO, General Motors, and Abigail Johnson, CEO, Fidelity Investments continue to hold their previous ranks at number two and three, respectively. Anthem CEO, Gail Boudreaux, has gained a position to reach rank four, followed by Carol Tomé, CEO, UPS, who debuted at number five.
Also making her debut to the list at rank six is the President of Citi, Jane Fraser; while Ruth Porat, CFO, Google, Alphabet, is at the seventh position. Popular Facebook COO, Sheryl Sandberg has slipped two positions from her 2019 ranking to number eight, whereas Best Buy CEO Corie Barry has improved her ranking significantly from 18 to nine in the 2020 list. Judith McKenna, President & CEO of one of the biggest global companies, Walmart, is the tenth most powerful business woman, 2020 in the Fortune list.
The youngest in the list is Corie Barry at 45 years, while Carol Tomé is oldest at 63. These leaders head businesses belonging to a variety of industries, from Information Technology to Finance and Retail, and they dominate the list owing to sheer hard work and stellar achievements.
COHERENCE AND COHESION
respectively - a great word to use when commenting on lists of information. It helps to link two sets of interconnected data. For example, “A, B, and C are like 1, 2, and 3, respectively.”
debuted - one of those strange words in the English language, the ‘t' is silent. If something has 'debuted’ (day-be-ood), it has been seen or exposed for the first time.
whereas - related to the issue of Coherence and Cohesion, this word is used above to link related but opposing information. For example, ‘This good thing happened one day, whereas this bad thing happened the next day.’
stellar achievement(s) - a really nice turn of phrase here. This means that the achievement was ‘stunning’ or ‘dazzling’, essentially very impressive.